2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:上网优缺点

文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨；请注意分段。

We can get lots of information in a short time so using the internet in a right method can improve our study.And we can make more friends,however,there are also some disadvantages of the Internet. Some students always play games or talk with friends,it's waste of time and money.This is extremely bad to study.And if you are careless,someone may cheat you when you go online.