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Dear friend: I'm so glad to hear that you are coming to China to celebrate the Mid-autumn Day with your parents. The Mid-autumn Day has a long history and it's Chinese unick chaditional festival.On that day,Chinese families get together to have a big dinner,especially eat some sweet moon cakes.Some families also go outside to see the full moon. I'm looking forward to see you in China. Lihua