2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

学术词汇使用较丰富，拼写做的很棒；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

computer and man By far, the computer is becoming more and more popular with the development of society .Man use the computer do a lot of things,and it brings many benefits to man. There are two views on computer,some people thought computer is bad for man,and others thought it is good for man. the former thought that computer bring convenient for us.we can do work by computers ,which release time and cost. And we can have in touch with friends and family who are distance for us by computer. It is very convenient for us to communicate.The latter thought that computer makes our life abnormal.Firstly,children and some adolescent play computer games and are addicted to it.Secondly,using computer make us less face to face communication and make our relation become less familiar.Lastly, man use the computer to attract country's security ,it is very serious issue. Everything has two side as the corn ,what we should do is to avoid the bad side and improve the good side .Only in this way we can better use it to service us .