高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。

I was born in a beautiful town. There were many trees standed around the town. And there were a river with clean water, not only the green grass ,but also the lovely fish in the river. Although the road in the town was very old and small , people worked hard to make it beautiful. People hadn't got much money ,but they were happy. Now ,fifteen years was past. In my hometown,many tall-building are builded up. And the road become bigger and bigger so that cars can bedrived in the town. But there is no tree here. The river haven't got fish.