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I had a good friend when I was a child.We used to play and got back home together,and we had been being best a pair of friends .When I was Grade three,he had to go to another place to study further with his parents.Upon the news coming to my ear,I felt so sad as to sleep around clock.Two years later,I saw him on the street again,it was when that I gave him a big hug.