小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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A new teacher comes to my classroom today.She has a long black hair and big black eye.On reaching our desk,she begins to introduce herself soon.She tell us her name is minghua and she is from Jiangsu Province.She also say she is willing to teach us and makes her every effort to help us to make a great progress in the near future.