2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇使用比较准确，词汇表达较丰富，但仍需增加词汇积累；作者句法基本功不错，可适当增加从句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

it is commonly thought that our society had dramatically changed by modern science and technology ,and human had made extraordinary progress in knowledge and technology .One of which is the computer ,as to whether it is benefit for us ,it is a long-running controversial debate,it goes without that people from different background hold different attitudes towards it . The majority of people hold the opinion that the computer can enrich our life ,for example ,play computer games ,see a movie and so on .what's better,it becomes the focus of the lives and the source of their happiness and contentment after work.at last ,people equate success in the life with the ability of operating computer. as far as i am concerned ,i firmly believe that as long as we can reasonable use the computer ,we can learn a lot.