2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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with the developing of the science technology,the computer is the importance roles in our daily life. the computer can make man's life more wonderful and convenience.Firstly,people can buy goods on the online shopping website.secondly,people can communicative on the fetion or QQ.the last but not the least,it is supply so useful information to help us in working and studing but it also harmful with us, on the one hand,it makes so many people are addicted with computer games and lost their health ,on the another hand,there are some big gug in computer make our computer does work normally all in all ,in my idea i think that the computer is more helpful with man than harful with man,we should have a correct attitude on computer.