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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用；文章用了较为丰富的词汇，学术词汇略显单薄，同时注意单词拼写的检查。
Nowadays,a great many families only have a child,so the children usually are indulged by all the family members.Gradually the children depend on their parents and the family members.This is a common phenomenon in our society. I suppose this situation should arouse the greatest concern.Above all,we had better educate the children how to be an independent person instead of helping them do everything.Second,praised the children when they are successful,and encouraged them when they are in failure.Then they will realize that they can independ without any helping.Finally,if he or she wants to be a successful person,must he or she learn to independ,Everything mainly depends on them. To be independ is a ong way to go .Anyway the parents must insist on making them independ,for they cannot accompany their children the whole life.Only in this way,can the children live more comfortable and deal with various troubles that they will get into in the future.
