小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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A new teacher comes to our classroom today and all our classmate are happy with her arrival.upon reachiing platform,she begins to introduce herself soon.She told us where she is from,and would make every effort to help us make a great progress in the near future.We are so excited to look forward to her lecture tomorrow.