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Dear Xiao Wang When I recieved the letter which said you will come to see me during the week-long holiday,I felt very happy.Welcome to our city. I miss you very much.So I have made the list where we will go when you arrived there.First,we will go to Zhangjiajie,the most famous place in our home tone.It is beautiful.In there you can see the beautiful scense and tast the delicious foods.Then we will go to the street in our city.The city is famouse for its cheap goods and its delicious foods. Now,our city is hot,you should take some dress which used in the summer days.I'm waiting for you. Yours Zhang Ying
