题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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Trust plays a important role nowadays.People tend to communicate better with trust.It provides convenience and profit when you trade with others;it gives you pleasure when you colaborate with others and it makes you more efficient because you can share your work with others. But what needs us take into consideration is that how to maintain trust. As far as I am concerned,we should improve ourself at first.It is essential that we realize the importance of trust and make ourself behave well so that we can get others' good impression.Second,we should communicate with others sincerely.The key to do this is to look things at others' point and we can't only consider personal profits.Last but not least,we should pay more attention on the behavior of us in daily life and give others a hand as much as possible.