题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达用的较灵活,同时能够较恰当地使用学术词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Computer is playing increasingly important role in our life.It is necessary no matter what fields you are. Some people even hold the view that computer will replace people in the future.It is no denying that the notion puts much more to the function of computer. This reminds us that how to look the important fuction of the computer and how to deal with the relationship of computer and man.Indeed, the computer pushes the growth of ecnomic and it gives us much convenience to communicate with others ,do our complex work and so on. But no matter what great changes the computer brings to our life,we need to remember that computer is created by man,and what the computer do is controlled by us and it is just a machine,a powerful and even magic machine.We shouldn't underestimate ourselves and regard computer as a god. As far as I am concerned,man is the master and computer is only a toll that we can do our work efficiently.We must look the relationship correctly.