2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays,people can't leave the computer.Computer has been along our live.Different people have different opions. Some people think computer is a very terrific thing,it not only improves people's knoledge and wides boddon,but also connect our relative.However,some people acknoledge it has bad impact on people's live.They think that is very bad if children are addicted in game.In that case,children will forget their homework. In my opion, every thing has two sides,computers can give us convenence and knoledge.But if we use it wrong,computer will give us something that we not want it.