2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错；词汇表达丰富度要注意，不过单词拼写错误较多。

Nodays,with the t devolpment of teclolegy,the computer also apple to us.thus, there are virious of views above this topoc. some people believe that computer do good benifit for us ,such as sraching intenet for news,chanting,or watchinng movie.we would not be comfortbale without it.Howeve,there be side effict beside it.Some people were addication to playing comeputer games,chanting,or watching movies in the abnomor time,which dose great harm in bother physically and psychologically. As far as I am concorned,It is high time that those people who were burride in it to stop play computer,we just make good use of it"benift.