小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Good friend I have a friend. Her name is Lily. She is my friend since Kindngendn. She is thin tall pretty girl. She has brown hair, big eyes and small mouth. She has a lot of hobbits such as dancing, singing, drawing and playing piano. Also she is a smart girl. I like her so much.