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My teacher's name is Lisa. She is kind and sincere. She has light blond hair, blue eyes and red mouth. She is the prettiest woman I have ever seen in the world. Also she is very nice to us. She always be percent to answer all of our questions and she always give us a lot of interesting work. We love her so much.