托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第41篇:为什么学生会选择出国留学

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Nowadays, studying abroad has become priority for more and more students who want to gain more advance technologies or more oversea's experience. But when come to this phenomenon, many people including me, may can't help to asking why they'd rather leaving their homeland and families they loved than stay at home and attending a chinese college? I think there may have some apparent reasons. Firstly, just as you know, developed country, such as the US, France or German, can provide more advance knowledge and more cutting-edge scientific technology which is exactly we can't acquire from our university, at least now, we have to admit that we do no better than these country's universities on the academic and practical part. Secondly, many foreign universities are willing to offer generous scholarship which is not only enough to support the students themselves but also even a whole family, I think this is a another attractive factor when they make their choice.