3、这种现象可能产生的影响
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1995 2000 2005
1万人 近4万 12万以上
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Recently the phenomenent of more and more people to choose to travel has been brought into focus.Especially when it comes to the Gloden week,a huge number of the people will go out instead of staying at home. With the improvement of the China,it's well known to us to travel is a way to boreden our minds.and you will make friends easily during the travel time.but maybe there is no one to put attention on the more terrible things.