高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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MY hometown My hometown is a good place in my heart,in the past,many green trees were surrounding my town and the river was so clear that fish could live in it.of course,people's life also easy and poor .The house was small ,the street was silde. but now,my town develop good but unavoid poulit has increase .large cars in streets and high bulidings in the street sides .environment became badly.trees decrease and fishs disappear .we have no time to wait environment's pollution.