2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Now,computer is more and more common in our family.It has a lot help to our dayily life.However,it also do harm to our life,forexample,it make some children be addicted to computer games,letting them do not study well.Then,I will tell you the influence of computer in detail. As we all know,computer has a lot positive influence in our life.It accelerate our step of life.Firet of all,it