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As the information technology develop,there are more and more E-books,which has been filling in our daily life.For example,we always see many people read E-books through their phone or computer when we go home by subway.Of course,this phenomonen must lead to a argement: Will E-books Replace Traditional Books? As we all know,a koin has two different fileds.So,there are two different ideas about this phonomonen.Some people hold the idea that E-books will repalce traditional books.The reason why they hold this idea is that they think E-books have more large capacity than traditional books,which can make E-books save more knowledge.Plus,E-book are more convenient than traditional books.Because you can save one E-book in your phone,which will make you avoid holding a heavy book.What's more,E-books cannot become dilapidated,however,traditional would be worn-out. As far as I am concerned,E-books and traditional books are also have its advantages and disadvantages.For example,E-books are more convenient than tanditional books,though thanditional books are more practical for it can't be influence by the time or site.So I think we should hold the dialectic views when we face the E-books and thanditional books.That's all.
