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I have a good friend who has very long black hair and two big black eyes.She is a pretty girl and is called Linda.Her voice is soft so she can sing very well.She is also good at playing the piano. She likes reading books and she often get good grades in exam.And she always help me with my study.I really think she is a nice friend!