题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
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建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文中能较灵活地使用学术词汇,但词汇量积累还要努力;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential for friends. However, there is no doubt that it is extremely easy to destory the trust. There are a couple of method to build and maintain trust. As we all know, it is the fact that communicating with friends is exceedingly vital for maintaining trust. If we have the puzzle, we should allow our friends to know and take effective measures to solve it. Besides, when our friends make mistakes, what we should do is forgiving them not blame for them. Last but not the least, I hold the firm belief that we are supposed to treat our friends sincerely. Only in this way can we make friends with a muititude of people. Obviously, if we attach importance to sincere communication, we are competent to build and maintain trust. It is a high time that effective measures should be taken to maintain trust.