2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Nowadays computer becomes more and more important for man.Computer is one part of man's life.Computers can do almost everything,including what man can not. As we all knowed ,man invented computer,but computer is stronger than man.Computer is not tired even though do things day and night， computer does not need relax and eat things, but man will.Then man should be worry about that maybe someday computer will raplace the man in most of life.What computer can not replace is rare,then what man should face is losing employment. On one hand,computer is strong,computer is convenient 。On the other hand,there exist something computer can not do,such as identify emotions of others. Man and computer should keep balance of each other.Will they get happy days in life.