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for the dear company , so happy to receive your letter that you have agreed me to offer a position for me. i am so glad about it. so thank you ! but what a regret for me to reduce your offer. the reason is that i have decided to have a higher graduation aboard. i want to have a better graduation and to up myself. i wish that the company can understand,it is my regret and i am feel sorry about it ! at last, i wish the company would have a great prospect!
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