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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3004
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题目 The Way to Success
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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The way to success Currently,more and more people want to find the road to success.But getting success seems a little difficult sometimes.In some ways,if you want to be successful,finding the way to success is the most significant thing that you can do. From where I stand,the first step to find the way to success is to perceive yourself.That's to say to understand what you want to get or what is the definition of success in your mind.However,if you want to leave your competitors behind,the second thing for you to find the way to success is making a clear plans.Actually,as we all know,making a clear plan is a good habit in your daily life.In some ways,it is useful for you if you want to be successful. Last but not least,being successful not only need you to be confident,but also being critical about something.In a word,the way to success seems different to different,but to be confident and critical is the same for everybody. So,everything is ever as perfect as you want is to be,to the best of your own ability,you can find the way to success and also to be successful.

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