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作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查。
there are a lot of acttractive cupons, group-buy deals seem to help us save money in our daily life. But to me ,it's really a big trap waiting for us.With those cheaper cupons or deals, we will spend more money on something we don't really want. First, there is a dead end with every cupons and vip cards. when you see your cupons nearly meet the end you will think how to use it or you will have a loss. Second, you will buy something useless just because that thing is on-sale but maybe you won't use it for a long time. Third, the things in as sale usually not a good product. You may buy a bad thing that with a lot of problems that you need to argue with the consumer service which will take your time. I really don't believe those favorable cupons or something.SOme advices from me.One is know what you need to have and get a qualified one wether is in sale or not. Another is if you want to try some retaruant new, ask some friends with you to share the fare. You can have a good time and lower pay.
