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2006年12月英语六级作文真题:西方的节日

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:36浏览次数:1492
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The Celebration of Western Festivals 
 1、现在国内不少人喜欢过西方的一些节日 
 2、产生这种现象的原因 
 3、这种现象可能带来的影响 
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in recent years ,it has sparked off a great range of favor in western festivals. More and more people ,especially the youth ,has a definitely awareness of the signification of western festival from their own viewpoint .They think that the blessing of follow the fad which is come from aboard is quite obvious and less more disadvantages. when it come to a comment in the foregoing topic,nothing is less to be listed than the following points which is to explain why there are so many enthusiasm of aboard festivals . Firstly ,i think that the mainstream of the acceleration of the globalization does a great amount of communication and massive deep influences to us.We intake a lot of information all the day and night, and with no exception the culture from outer world . Second, we acquire a great deal of funny thing and behave we haven t ever seen,take some example like the Christmas card which is sending the best blessing to our friends ,the Valentine s Day which is give us some happiness and warm moments to stay with our valentine .The Day fill our life with abundance feeling we cant get from our owner native festivals .

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