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Nowsday, it has been a good trendency that all people pay so much attention to saving money and lead a good life. I think it is a smart and appropriate way to be careful with our money when we are consuming. The following are my reasons. Firstly, using the counpons or participating the group-buy deals is indeed much cheaper than the real price of a product. For instance, when you are having the KFC or other fast food in China, counpons is a best way to buy food since it will save your money so much. Secondly, it does not mean that we can not enjoy the high quality service if we use counpons and buy the sale commodities. For example, some department store will always has some activities for special day like Nation Day,so it can be easy for us to buy the commodities which is not only cheap but with high qulity. Thirdly, it is a good option to save money for ourselves accroding to buying something with counpons or discounted goods so that we can use the saving money in more ways. So, it is not only make us to be a smart consumer to buy some commodities with discounted but aslo it is a good way to lead a happy life.
