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有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；可适当增加几条从句；作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，更能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇。
Nowsday, it has been a good tendency that all people pay so much attention to saving money and lead a good life. I claim it is a smart and appropriate way to be careful with our money when we are consuming. The following are my reasons. Firstly, using the coupons or participating in the group-buy deals is indeed much more inexpensive than the real price of a product. For instance, when you are having the KFC or other fast food in China, counpons is a best way to purchase goods since it will save your money so much. Secondly, it does not mean that we can not enjoy the high quality service if we use coupons and purchase the sale commodities. For example, some department stores will always have some activities for special day like Nation Day,so it can be easy for us to buy the commodities which is not only cheap but with high qulity. Thirdly, it is a good option to save money for ourselves accroding to buying something with coupons or discounted goods so that we can use the saving money in more ways. So, it is not only make us to be a smart consumer to buy some commodities with discounted but aslo it is a good way to lead a happy life.
