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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:58浏览次数:6180
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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文章学术词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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It is universally acknowledged that trust is essential for friends. However, there is no doubt that it is extremely easy to destroy the trust. There are a couple of method to build and maintain trust. As we all know, it is the fact that communicating with friends is exceedingly vital for maintaining trust. If we have the puzzle, we should allow our friends to know and take effective measures to solve it. Besides, when our friends make mistakes, what we should do is forgiving them not blame for them. Last but not least, I hold the firm belief that we are supposed to treat our friends sincerely. Only in this way can we make friends with a multitude of people. Obviously, if we attach importance to sincere communication, we are competent to build and maintain trust. It is a high time that effective measures should be taken to maintain trust.

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