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With the developement of people's life standard,people have a higher standard for their life.For example we can see the the excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society.Nowadays this phenomenon is a most common.Clothes swathe in paper,placed in box and eventually wrapped in well-designed plastic bags.Fruits put in hard-woven baskets,and all imported commodities are packed with delicate packaging.Despite of this,it was not taken seriously. I presume that there are various of causes as below.Above all,some people think that the more fine the package is ,the better the product is.Second,the delicate packaging which are more attractive people and arouse person's consume.Therefore,it will benefit those merchants earn much more money.Finally,Chinese people like to give goods with each other.If the merchandise which is given your friends with delicate packaging,then it will show that you are a person who is rich and generous. As far as I am concerned,if the situation is not under control,it will cause disastrous effects that the natural resouces will be reduced and environment polluted.Thus,some measures should be taken.For instance,setting some rules and regulations to prevent those excessive packaging companies,discipling them the importance of precious resources.Moreover,ecouraging them plastic recycle.Only by this means,can our environment will become more and more beautiful.