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2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:41浏览次数:9786
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题目 On Excessive Packaging
要求
1.目前许多商品存在过度包装的现象
2.出现这一现象的原因
3.我对这一现象的看法和建议
字数:120满分:100分
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作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误;从句使用量稍显不足;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

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With the developement of people's life standard,people have a higher standard for their life.For example we can see the the excessive packaging of goods are prevailing in our society.Nowadays this phenomenon is a most common.Clothes swathe in paper,placed in box and eventually wrapped in well-designed plastic bags.Fruits put in hard-woven baskets,and all imported commodities are packed with delicate packaging.Despite of this,it was not taken seriously. I presume that there are various of causes as below.Above all,some people think that the more fine the package is ,the better the product is.Second,the delicate packaging which are more attractive people and arouse person's consume.Therefore,it will benefit those merchants earn much more money.Finally,Chinese people like to give goods with each other.If the merchandise which is given your friends with delicate packaging,then it will show that you are a person who is rich and generous. As far as I am concerned,if the situation is not under control,it will cause disastrous effects that the natural resouces will be reduced and environment polluted.Thus,some measures should be taken.For instance,setting some rules and regulations to prevent those excessive packaging companies,discipling them the importance of precious resources.Moreover,ecouraging them plastic recycle.Only by this means,can our environment will become more and more beautiful.

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