2005年6月英语六级作文真题:关于盗版

文中单词拼写做的很棒，再多积累些词汇就更好了；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅；可以适当增加副词的使用。

nowadays, more and more people as so to earn much money , many pirated products are floored in society. as for citizens, some people choose the pirated products with the less money. it is severe that the pirated products popular. for this phenomenon , the reason that is with the trade market fierce, more and more people began to sell the pirated products with the lower price. and customers thinks that it is common to buy the pirated products and also can use the lower money to buy one. so this phenomenon is prevailing in society. as far as i am concerned, the trade market and government should take the treasure to crack down on the pirated products seller and strengthen the power to lead the society to a right point. and as a citizen , we should reduce the pirated products and keep buying the real products.