小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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Jim's family There is a pictuer on my desk. My best friend's family in this pictuer, my best friend's name is Jim.There is three people in this photo. In this photo, a tall man stand under the tree is Jim's father ,his mother stand at right,Jim stand between his father and his mother.Jim is a student in a colliage now.His father is a soft engineer in a big company.His mother works in a bank. They lives very happy!