题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;文章词汇使用多样性不足,且单词拼写错误较多;请注意分段。
Nowadays,computer has become more and more popular.Almost everything can be delt with by computer,so our people can do few things.but computers are not very good.they need us to look after.so we are more inteligent than the computer.I do believe that human beings play a role in our lives and conductions.