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2004年1月英语六级作文真题:浪费现象

发布时间:2013-05-14 22:36浏览次数:1942
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese. 

1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 

2.浪费的危害

3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起 

用户的作文(系统评分82.0分
评语:

文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用学术词汇有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;若注意一些语法错误,文章会更漂亮。

用户练习作文:

Reduce waste on campus Nowadays,more and more college students had a strong tendency to waste something which is useful for them.What the issue is to reduce waste on campus chick and fast. As we all know,wasting is a bad habit.One the one hand,if you waste something,it means you should waste more money to buy the same thing.Also,on the other hand,in our daily life ,wasting may cause many problems.Such as pollution.That is to say,currently,many people tend to throw something which is available for us away,like batteries,plastic packages so on and so forth.In some ways,your actions will cause many pollution problems which will do harm to our environment. From where I stand,I perceive that if we want to reduce waste on campus,first,we should let the college students know this action is bad,setting their own awareness of protecting the environment.What's more,the leaders of the colleges may set up some regulation systems or terms to reduce the waste on campus.Last but not least,you should improve a habit of saving.One day,you will find your action influence someone surrounding you,and then that is the miracle you make.

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