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过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加从句的使用；作者词汇量比较丰富，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活，但要避免出现拼写错误。
It is said that helping others is helping ourselves, and I believe that is the reason why more and more people tend to be a volunteer and provide help to other people. Because they can not only satisfy themself during the process of helping others but can achieve their social value when doing voluntary affairs. Firstly, being a volunteer is a way to give our feedback to society. One can not live without the help of others, so it is our duty to contribute to society to some extent. Being a volunteer, we can try to find out the needs of others and help to deal with their peoblems, which is quite worthwhile and pratical. Secondly, we can gain inner satisfation and contribution spirit from voluntary affairs, which is much more valueable than financial returns. For instance, when we are volunteering others, it will be easy to be approvaled by society, which we will gradually gain the confidence and lead a happy life. In a word, if everyone in this society are all willing to be a volunteer, our society will become more and more harmonious and effective.
