2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；文中词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

The Importance of Reading classics Reading classics at the final night of one year has been a fashion in many major cities,because of its fun. In a few past years,people loved the party of Spring Festival,while some people oppose to hold the Spring Festival Party any more.There are three reasons,firstly,the Spring Festival Party is gradually not worth watching .according to its fun decreasing,secondly,the fund which subjects the party to be held is increasing,thirdly,there are more and more classics held,not just Spring Festival's party. On my views,the Spring Festival's party has been a tradition since many years ago,as a result,we can't cancle it.But,the Spring Festival's party should keep its tradition,likewise,create new activites.