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字数：300 满分：100分
过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句；希望作者可以加强词汇表达多样性，尤其是学术词汇的积累；请注意分段。
in my view ,this kind of habitat can help us become a smart customer ,for the next reasons. First,the coupons will give us a discount when we buy something,especially something is dear,we can save some mony.second, while we collect some coupons, we will plan to buy something we need,in this way ,we could use our ponies reasonably.As a saying goes,if you fail to plan, then you plan to fail. As a student,we have no enough money to buy something we needn't,therefore,we must learn to how to arrange our money.
