小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Oliver is my good friend.She has long hair and big eyesshe not only is a beateful girl but also work very hard and well..Everyday ,we work to school along the rode.I and Oliver stay at the same class,she always help others and smile to face all the thing.She set a simple for us to work hard.