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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分75.5分
评语:

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文中词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较熟练地使用部分学术词汇,但请认真检查词汇的拼写;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

I do really not agree with snap judgments,because those decisions were made without deeply thinking of comprehensive situtation. Now I illustrate my opinoin with several facts. Everytime when Japan had some movements to diaoyu Island, the first thing came to our public's mind that is to reject the Japanese products.So people gathered at street to destory the store of selling Japanese brand items or break down Jpanese brand cars. Those things actually belonged to us and were made by our workers. This act lead to amount of finanical loss ;what's more some people even get hurts. And at the end the government had to spent a lot of personnel and money to restoring it. Istead when we had thought twice before we took actions,we could aviod damages caused by our behaviors. Another case is my own experience.I still remember what a big mistake happend in my examination to college school.When I did an biology "right-or-wrong" question,I made the choice without any hestation because I did the same one in my practce.But eventually it turned out that I get in a trap and I lost the chance to my ideal university. So from my own perspective, I believe that snap judements can never be trusted.

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