托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者词汇基础不错，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

I do really not agree with snap judgments,because those decisions were made without deeply thinking of comprehensive situation. Now I illustrate my opinion with several facts. Everytime when Japan had some movements to diaoyu Island, the first thing came to our public's mind that is to reject the Japanese products.So people gathered at street to destory the store of selling Japanese brand items or break down Jpanese brand cars. Those things actually belonged to us and were made by our workers. This act lead to amount of financial loss ;what's more some people even get hurts. And at the end the government had to spend a lot of personnel and money to restore. Istead when we had thought twice before we took actions,we could aviod damages caused by our behaviors. Another case is my own experience.I still remember what a big mistake happened in college entrance examination.When I did a biology "right-or-wrong" question,I made the choice without any hestation because I did the same one in my practce.But eventually it turned out that I get in a trap and I lost the chance to my ideal university. So from my own perspective, I believe that snap judgments can never be trusted.