2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但请注意单词拼写的检查；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。

with the development of the economic and technology ,people 's life has bocome more and more confortable and conventient,which have to own to the computer's evolution. it it the true that computers do bring a lot of convent to our life. in our living we save a lot of time to use them .Now just stay at home ,we have bought some commodiations and take some fee.In the factory ,some equipments have controled by computers ,as result ,people not only could have avoided dangerous and bad environment,but also improved efficient. even some people take some occuptions on line. now computer can provide more and more comsiderable servives and requriement. I hope computer can develope it's protential value to meet our commends.