2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education is very important to everyone,which maybe the key factor for getting high salary.Meanwhile,there is a close connection between education and earings and unemployment. This is the date from Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey,which are for persons age 25 and over.From the survey we can see that the more education pays ,the lower unemployment rate ,and the average of unemployment was 7.6% in 2011.The unemployment of rate with Doctoral degree and Professional degree respectively are 2.5%,2.4%. However,if one person with higher education ,they will get more money.Especially,with Bachelor's degree or higher degree ,the earings they get are more than the average of 797$. In my opinion,if people want to be emplyed and get high salary ,then they need to study hard to pursue higher education degree.