2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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The Importance of Reading classics Reading classics at the final night of one year has been a fashion in many major cities,because of its fun. In a few past years,people loved the party of Spring Festival,while some people are opposed to hold the Spring Festival Party any more.There are three reasons,firstly,the Spring Festival Party is gradually not worth watching.according to its fun decreasing,secondly,the fund which subjects the party to be held is increasing,thirdly,there are more and more classics held,not just Spring Festival Party. On my views,the Spring Festival Party has been a tradition since many years ago,as a result,we can't cancel it.Butthe Spring Festival Party should keep its tradition,likewise,create new activities.