2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；结构不严谨，几乎没有使用衔接词，上下文衔接欠流畅。

By the graph,we can know education pay is high,earnings are more.Less than high school diploma's people are most highest in unemployment rate in 2011.Since the education pays are increased,people can make more and more earnings,and the unemployment rate is decreased.But,people get professional degree,their unemployment is the most lowest. So,in my opinion,education pays must be needed.We can study hard,we can get some useful knowledge.When we work in the company,we can finish the job better by using these knowledge.If we don't know everything,we will not find a good job.I agree adequate education pays,but too high education pays to make harmful to our lives.Because we hope to get higher degree,we must spend more time to study,we are only study a little knowledge.Some social skills are not studyed. As far as i am concerned,we should study adequately.