小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Lily is my best friend. She has big eyes and long hair. She likes playing the piano while she hate always playing the piano. We often play together and have a good time. Everyday we go to school and eat lunch. On weekends, sometimes our families have a picnic together. I hope we can be good friends forever!