小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend, her name is Guo Yuhong and she is 12 years old this year, she is very lively and cheerful she is 148 cm tall. She likes the Internet, read a Book her temper is good people are pretty long she can sing very well . She's my best friend.