小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My good friend guoyuhong who is 12 years old。She is very outgoing with 148 centimeters。And she likes surfing in the internet and reading books。She is good temper。What's more ，she is beautiful and sings pleasent。She is my best friend。 I hope that we will be good friend for the whole life.